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bwtr · 1st October 2007, 07:48

simonced may have a point about the wall bump being a fraction heavy--by a weany bit maybe (though my house is nearly as cracked at the moment)
I could imagine a broken wall top--no roof--but maybe the scene need to be in moonlight?
Whatever, every version you are doing is working in its own right! Great imagery ideas. Thanks for sharing--great inspiration.

moxstudios · 1st October 2007, 12:13

Thanks simonce and bwtr, yes the scene have no ceiling I want the scene to look like sun light but I thing I have to make the light a bit stronger I still playing

.ma bey I get to crazy with the details in the walls are getting to much attention..

crazy wabbit · 1st October 2007, 19:26

I like it, my only comment is to put a nice green field with a tree in far back (in the window) instead of what you got. Why you may ask, well he is inside and sad with 4 walls while outside is a world for him to discover, also the contrast of colors will make your image much more powerful.

moxstudios · 1st October 2007, 20:43

Ma bey can by a happy Bear in a hill.

crazy wabbit · 1st October 2007, 20:52

Yes but he is stuck inside

RedSquare · 2nd October 2007, 20:17

Well for what's it's worth, I feel that through the window is too busy, if there is broken glass I can't see it.

moxstudios · 2nd October 2007, 20:42

you have a good point I, think I need to simplified the glass to have a good view of the background.

crazy wabbit · 2nd October 2007, 21:02

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Originally Posted by moxstudios

you have a good point I, think I need to simplified the glass to have a good view of the background.

I think the wall behind the glass is the problem, cause it is the same color and texture as the wall inside. That is why i gave the idea of tree and farm.

moxstudios · 3rd October 2007, 14:47

Another update, let me know the background stiil in progres

JakalDesign · 3rd October 2007, 15:08

Looking really good Mox... Only 2 crits from me.

1. I thing the window would look better with slats... so it will have 4 pains instead of just one.

2. It feels as if the background should be more urban than the country scene you have now.

Keep up the great work!

RedSquare · 4th October 2007, 00:18

I wonder as there is no ceiling/roof, whether the image would cope with say just the shadow(s) of some ceiling joists/rafters ?

Not too many though.

romiworks · 4th October 2007, 06:24

Quote:

Originally Posted by moxstudios

Another update, let me know the background stiil in progres

Nice 3D scene work! I think in the real world the best background for outside should be matched some old houses like in town since this is an abandoned house. BTW what's resolution did you use in this rendering?
me I always use wide pixel format in 300dpi in carrara.

Etienne Colas · 11th October 2007, 09:47

I appreciate.
The tree in the window looks more like a painting on a wall than part of the background.

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1st October 2007, 07:48	#41 (permalink)
bwtr Brian Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: South Australia Posts: 2,130	simonced may have a point about the wall bump being a fraction heavy--by a weany bit maybe (though my house is nearly as cracked at the moment) I could imagine a broken wall top--no roof--but maybe the scene need to be in moonlight? Whatever, every version you are doing is working in its own right! Great imagery ideas. Thanks for sharing--great inspiration.

1st October 2007, 12:13	#42 (permalink)
moxstudios Moderator Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 461	Thanks simonce and bwtr, yes the scene have no ceiling I want the scene to look like sun light but I thing I have to make the light a bit stronger I still playing .ma bey I get to crazy with the details in the walls are getting to much attention..

1st October 2007, 19:26	#43 (permalink)
crazy wabbit Now, I learn animation Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,381	I like it, my only comment is to put a nice green field with a tree in far back (in the window) instead of what you got. Why you may ask, well he is inside and sad with 4 walls while outside is a world for him to discover, also the contrast of colors will make your image much more powerful.

1st October 2007, 20:43	#44 (permalink)
moxstudios Moderator Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 461	Ma bey can by a happy Bear in a hill.

1st October 2007, 20:52	#45 (permalink)
crazy wabbit Now, I learn animation Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,381	Yes but he is stuck inside

2nd October 2007, 20:42	#47 (permalink)
moxstudios Moderator Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 461	you have a good point I, think I need to simplified the glass to have a good view of the background.

3rd October 2007, 14:47	#49 (permalink)
moxstudios Moderator Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 461	Another update, let me know the background stiil in progres

3rd October 2007, 15:08	#50 (permalink)
JakalDesign Extrusion Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Idaho Falls, ID Posts: 180	Looking really good Mox... Only 2 crits from me. 1. I thing the window would look better with slats... so it will have 4 pains instead of just one. 2. It feels as if the background should be more urban than the country scene you have now. Keep up the great work!

11th October 2007, 09:47	#53 (permalink)
Etienne Colas A la ligne Join Date: Dec 2003 Posts: 2,538	I appreciate. The tree in the window looks more like a painting on a wall than part of the background.