On-Line Graphic novel - Polyloop

wolfriver · 14th April 2007, 10:25

For anyone interested, here are some more pages from my comic.
Rendered in Carrara and hand drawn and framed, etc in photoshop.
Any comments would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks everyone,

wolfriver · 14th April 2007, 10:28

And a few more...

handrawn · 18th April 2007, 01:05

These are lovely Wolfriver - I think you've done a great job, look forward to seeing more.

Small point here - whilst the lettering is crystal clear at 100%, it becomes a bit difficult to read at 50% reduction. The 'PULL UP !' in page 14 doesn't work because it has bled from the balloon and looks wrong. Maybe a saw-tooth balloon here fully encircling the lettering, perhaps with a degree of transparency, to bring the lettering out in emphasis. Perhaps no balloon at all and saw-tooth lettering?

I really like the drawing style.

You've composed the pages really well and in keeping with the subject matter. [Eisner knew what he was talking about.

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wolfriver · 19th April 2007, 14:11

Thanks a heap, Handrawn.
I love your idea of that balloon using sawtooth and some transparency.
I'll definitely do that. As soon as I read that idea it clicked.
I'll post it when I get around to doing it.

crazy wabbit · 20th April 2007, 03:22

very nice work, you are talent man.

wolfriver · 20th April 2007, 03:37

Thanks Behzad.

solt · 30th April 2007, 11:27

like the Crazy Wabbit

i think you have a great talent for this kind of Art

i draw comic too, but in a traditional way, paper , pencil and ink,
take a look,and tell me what you point of view ....

http://forums.polyloop.net/travaux-c...e-corbeau.html

14th April 2007, 10:25	#1 (permalink)
wolfriver Spline Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	On-Line Graphic novel For anyone interested, here are some more pages from my comic. Rendered in Carrara and hand drawn and framed, etc in photoshop. Any comments would be greatly appreciated. Thanks everyone, Attached Thumbnails __________________ Thanks, Wolf "Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts." _A. Einstein Last edited by wolfriver; 17th April 2007 at 14:59. Reason: spelling mistake

14th April 2007, 10:28	#2 (permalink)
wolfriver Spline Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	And a few more... Attached Thumbnails __________________ Thanks, Wolf "Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts." _A. Einstein

19th April 2007, 14:11	#4 (permalink)
wolfriver Spline Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	Thanks a heap, Handrawn. I love your idea of that balloon using sawtooth and some transparency. I'll definitely do that. As soon as I read that idea it clicked. I'll post it when I get around to doing it. __________________ Thanks, Wolf "Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts." _A. Einstein

20th April 2007, 03:37	#6 (permalink)
wolfriver Spline Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 56	Thanks Behzad. __________________ Thanks, Wolf "Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts." _A. Einstein

30th April 2007, 11:27	#7 (permalink)
solt Nomade 3Deiste Join Date: May 2004 Location: Firminy_France Posts: 2,628 Images: 9	like the Crazy Wabbit i think you have a great talent for this kind of Art i draw comic too, but in a traditional way, paper , pencil and ink, take a look,and tell me what you point of view .... http://forums.polyloop.net/travaux-c...e-corbeau.html __________________ " It's better to burn out than it is to rust " " Mieux vaut brûler que rouiller " ------------------------------- Mes images

18th April 2007, 01:05	#3 (permalink)
handrawn Vertex Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 7	These are lovely Wolfriver - I think you've done a great job, look forward to seeing more. Small point here - whilst the lettering is crystal clear at 100%, it becomes a bit difficult to read at 50% reduction. The 'PULL UP !' in page 14 doesn't work because it has bled from the balloon and looks wrong. Maybe a saw-tooth balloon here fully encircling the lettering, perhaps with a degree of transparency, to bring the lettering out in emphasis. Perhaps no balloon at all and saw-tooth lettering? I really like the drawing style. You've composed the pages really well and in keeping with the subject matter. [Eisner knew what he was talking about. ]

20th April 2007, 03:22	#5 (permalink)
crazy wabbit Now, I learn animation Join Date: May 2005 Posts: 1,369	very nice work, you are talent man.

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