Heh, the "fumbling" part can be just as instructive as the easier, more fluid parts, it just illustrates all the different ways you can think about something and how to build it and doesn't reflect so much on a skill level or anything. I noticed those things and identified with them and that's the only reason I made comments. If you polish something up too much then it just becomes showing off and loses some of the genuineness of it I think.
If anything, I'd say add a little music to the next one, it's always nice to have a little hard rock or metal to listen to when you're modeling. Oh, by the way you never mentioned what capture soft you were trying out, I still just use erm,... Wink-2 and it does the job, but it's mem intensive and I need to stop at least every 5 minutes at 6fps or my system bogs down.
Keep em coming, I haven't posted anything lately because I'm doing other stuff, but I'm watching to be sure and look forward to getting back in the game myself soon.
Steven