These are lovely Wolfriver - I think you've done a great job, look forward to seeing more.
Small point here - whilst the lettering is crystal clear at 100%, it becomes a bit difficult to read at 50% reduction. The 'PULL UP !' in page 14 doesn't work because it has bled from the balloon and looks wrong. Maybe a saw-tooth balloon here fully encircling the lettering, perhaps with a degree of transparency, to bring the lettering out in emphasis. Perhaps no balloon at all and saw-tooth lettering?
I really like the drawing style.
You've composed the pages really well and in keeping with the subject matter. [Eisner knew what he was talking about.
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